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Eunhyuk and Tablo's Summer Holiday Monologues
Saturday, January 10, 2009
Author: ViNa Title: Eunhyuk and Tablo's Summer Holiday Monologues Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/ViNa5/ Reviewer: purple_lilly Site: VST http://ver-sah-tyle.blogspot.com Title: 3/5 Its a bit plain and simple. Straight-forward, but for me, it seems like it could be better. Poster/Background: 10/10 The theme of the poster and background suites the theme of the story. And, its not busy. I can easily read it. Forewords: 5/10 You could've explained a bit more about the characters, and added a little description of what the story is about. Though the title says it, its always to good to explain it to readers. - Just don't reveal too many things. Plot: 15/15 Its an interesting plot. I don't think there are many stories that have the same plot as that (well the 'abandonded' part definitley) but, other than that, you're story's pretty unique. - In my point of view. Creativity/Originality: 8/15 I haven't heard of Tablo before (sorry Epik High fans) so, I'd say that adding him to the characters were good. I've noticed that lately there aren't many Eunhyuk fanfics anymore, and by making him one of your characters it adds more points. However, the reason I deducted the 15 to 8, is because I don't know Tablo very well, so I wouldn't be too keen to read a story with him in. Though, thats just my opinion. Flow: 10/10 Its a nice pace. Nothing is going too fast, nor is anything draggy and slow. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10 Your spelling and grammar is amazing, so is your vocabulary. I don't need to tell you to improve anything, since its as good as it can get ^^. Characterization: 8/10 Once again, I say that there aren't many Eunhyuk fanfics anymore. (Maybe Eunhae >,>) However, when I look at the 'Main Artiste(s) I don't see Tablo so much. So, its pretty good to sometimes be unique and not always include Kim JaeJoong (since he's sooo popular and many people use him as a character, just to get readers). Writing Style: 10/10 I like your writing style, I really like how you words things etc.. Overall Enjoyment: 5/5 So far, from what I've read, I'm really liking the story. Its really nice to read something ... 'different' from the stories I usually read. Sub-Total: 84/100 Extras: 3/5 1 for the slight delay of the review. (sorry about that). 2 for the quality of your work. And the 3rd one because I just REALLY like your poster and BG :D Total: 87/105 (0 happiness)
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