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♥ White [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
White by RAINxclouds Story Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/wite_cjsk Reviewer: Juliada3 Status: Completed Title: 3/5 The title was not very interesting, but it tied in with the theme of your whole story. Poster/Background: 8/10 The poster has both of the main characters, and it gives off a sad mood. The background is good, but if you had used a different color font, it might have shown up a lot better. Forewords: 6/10 Your forewords didn't really give a lot of what the story was about, and you didn't elaborate a whole lot on who the characters were and what their personalities were like. Plot: 12/15 Your plot was really interesting. I was a little scared at the end. It seemed pretty emo-like. It was definitely something that I had never seen before. Creativity/Originality: 14/15 It was really creative. I did not anticipate something like this at all. I know there was a warning about it being scary, but it exceeded my expectations. Flow: 8/10 It flowed pretty well, and it did not hurry or end abruptly. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10 Your spelling and grammar was pretty good. I did not see any mistakes. Your vocabulary was pretty good, but there are some places where you could use better words which would improve the imagery of the scene. Characterisation: 6/10 Your characterization was not very definitive. If you had given each character something special and unique that set them apart from the others, then your characters would be easier to relate to. Writing Style: 7/10 Your writing style is very easy to read, and it doesn't not take away from the story. Overall Enjoyment: 3/5 This fanfic was pretty dark, but I liked it. It was really interesting and different. Sub Total: 75/100 Bonus: 3/5 Total: 78/100 (0 happiness)
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