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♥ A Threath Disrupted Relations [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Author: ~Genuie Cari~ Story Title: A Threat Disrupted Relations Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/threatened/ Reviewer: Mei Yee Title: 4/5 It immediately caught my attention and it wasn't common at all. It didn't gave your whole story away. I guess it does have something to do with your story. Poster/Background: 9/10 I love the poster and the background. The text is really easy to read with the color of the background. Forewords: 7/10 Even though your forewords are plain and simple it's enough for me. You should state the character's information. Plot: 13/15 Your plot is interesting but sometimes it's a little bit boring. It's boring because it's a little bit common. Creativity/Originality: 13/15 I can't say that your story is common because it isn't but sometimes it is. Your story, to me is 90% original. The rest is the common parts. Flow: 8/10 I'm not really sure about your flow because I feel that it's fast, slow and perfect. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10 I'm sure your mistakes are not made on purpose. You have very few mistakes here. It all seemed perfect. There's nothing wrong with your spelling, vocabulary or grammar. There's nothing wrong with your usage of words. Characterization: 10/10 You described your characters very well since there's not much characters in your story. Writing Style: 10/10 Nothing wrong with your writing style. Overall Enjoyment: 4/5 Your story is amazing but I get bored sometimes. Sub Total: 87 /100 Bonus:5/5 Total: 92 / 105 (0 happiness)
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