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♥ Supernova [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Story Title: Supernova Author: GD-Babyism URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/gdbabyish Reviewer: Yoon He @ ver-sah-tyle Title: 4/5 Your title is unique and original! So far, I have not found any fanfics with that title! And the title suits with the story! Poster/Background: 8/10 The poster was well-done! It shows how Myunghee felt sad about her disease. Nice job! And the background is suitable; it doesn’t distract me from reading the words. Forewords: 8/10 The foreword is understandable but some parts of it are confusing. However, it is still good as you described some parts of the story and what the story is about. Plot: 13/15 I had read a fic about a girl who had disease and had to suffer for long years and those cliché things, but this is not cliché! You describe every single thing about how Myunghee first got the disease at a young age and how Jaebum met Myunghee first. I like how you describe it as I could even imagine it in my mind! Creativity/Originality: 13/15 As I said, I had already read a girl who had to suffer for a long time. But still, I gave you good marks as you changed the plot from cliché to novel. Flow: 10/10 Great job! I was able to understand every single thing about it! You go with the flow, that’s what I love! Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10 Another thing to praise about! You have no mistakes! Frankly, it was surprising. Charaterisation: 8/10 Though I said I could imagine it, there are some parts that I couldn’t get about the characters. Sorry! Writing Style: 9/10 Like I said, you go with the flow. It was surprising, as every time I read a fanfic, most of them are a bit rushing but yours are long and relaxed. Overall Enjoyment: 5/5 Everything was superb! I was speechless! Sub-Total: 88/100 Extras: 4/5 Your bonus for making such a great story! Frankly, this is one of the best stories I’ve come afar. Total: 92/105 (0 happiness)
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