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♥ Stavolta [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Author: BoBoLi0us Title: Stavolta URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/Reminiscence05/ Reviewer: SaMaNtHa @ VST Title: 5/5 The title was perfect for the storyline, it was also very different from other titles. If I saw it on Winglin I'd probably click it! Poster/Background: 10/10 The poster and bg was really pretty. The poster really gave out the emotions of the storyline. The bg was dark which protrade with the story/mood very well it also made the font easy to read. So yeah, sipjeom manjeome sipjeom! Forewords: 9/10 The foreword was good. You added a catchy prologue, an authors note, and stated who the characters were! It was good! The length was short but other than that it was good! Plot: 13/15 The plot was different and good. You knew who your audience were and you wrote a story that will connect well with them. I was very surprised on how the story connected so much with your readers. Everyone had the same emotions. It was good. It was a simple storyline, nothing much happened but it was still very good. Creativity/Originality: 14/15 Creativity like I said on the plot it was simple nothing really happened but its still good. The originality was great! I can tell that the story was made and written by you and I know that the story came from the heart which is awesome! Flow: 8/10 The flow was alright. Everything was well balanced until the ending. I think you kind of rushed through the ending. Everything happened kind of fast and how the ending happened, it was fast too. Everything was balanced until the ending. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 7/10 There were small mistakes here and there like be should be been for this sentence, (And by ‘him’, I mean the person I’d be in love with since forever.) Rereading this sentence you notice that the word/spelling is not right! The grammar was okay, there were also some mistakes but only small mistakes, for example, (I sat there, listening to him tell me everything.) It should be like this, "I sat there, listening to him as he told me everything." So basically there were small spelling mistakes, your grammar was good, but you just word your sentence weirdly and your vacab was good. Characterization: 8/10 The characterization was good. You connected the character with your readers. You gave the character a personality that people can relate to. But I think it was a bit to simple. I didn't really get the character. I know she was a huge fan and was very understanding but there wasn't much information on the character. You did good on the characterization but the personality didn't pop out. Writing Style: 10/10 Your writing style was neat and understandable. There were fair amount of dialogue and description! There were also details so it was good! Overall Enjoyment: 4/5 I enjoyed it. It was very touching and I can so connect to it! It was well written! Sub-Total: 88/100 Extras: 4/5 Total: 92/105 (0 happiness)
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