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♥ River Flows In You [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Title: River Flows in You Author: 'Niii Link: http://winglin.net/fanfic/_riverflow/ Reviewer: Jaellie @ VST {http://ver-sah-tyle.blogspot.com} Note: The author and I have no relations whatsoever. Title: 3/5 If I'm not mistaken I've seen a lot of the same title as yours just different plot, so for me it's very common. Poster/Background: 10/10 Beautiful that's all I can say. Forewords: 10/10 It was simple and straight to the point. Plot: 13/15 The plot for your story is wonderful. She was the cold hearted girl who only trusts a few, while he was the opposite. Their relationship grew, it didn't go by quickly. They started as friends and ended as lovers. I love plot like these but because I read plots like these before I can't give you a full mark. Creativity/Originality: 15/15 I loved your creativity although the plot was not so original you gave it your own twist. Flow: 10/10 The flow of your story was really good. There were no boring bits, though you keep jumping scene it didn't feel like you were. Everything was explained with so much detail, I could picture everything in my head. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10 I didn't have any problem with this, everything was good. Characterisation: 8/10 The characterization was good but because the girl remained anonymous I deducted points. Her attitude and the way she is was well described but I wanted her to be named. Writing Style: 10/10 I love your writing style. The flow in your writing is so good like seriously I was so into the story. Overall Enjoyment: 5/5 I enjoyed your story, like I said I was so into it. Sub-Total: 94/100 Bonus: 5/5 This is for my Minwhan and for the wonderful story. I didn't expect her to die; I thought she was actually there watching him. I thought she actually hugged him, I know she did but what I mean is I thought she was alive. Make sense? LOL but yes thanks for letting me review this story. It was beautifully written, and yes you should be proud. Total: 99/105 Well done sweetie ^^ (0 happiness)
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