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♥ Omo! I'm In Love... [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Author: grapestrawberry Story: Omo! I'm In love... w/ my worst enemy Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/grapestrawberry/ Reviewer: Darkess @ ver-sah-tyle.blogspot.com start at 16 *My reviews are not meant to harm or discourage the author, but to help them fix their stories and do better in the future. The opinions expressed in this review are mine and mine alone, and are not meant to offend you* Title: 5/5 Totally fit, and I would definitely be able to pick this out on the winglin page ;D Poster/Background: 10/10 Really cute ;D I was really looking forword to this story once I saw it, because I thought that this would be a bright, happy, and funny story from the poster. Forewords: 6/10 Hm. I like the introduction to the girl, but I think that there could have been more of a teaser there to really start your story off. Spelling/Grammar: 9/10 times but (4) times, but That’ (10) That had phone (17) had phoned You’re hair’s (24) Your hair's also taking a peak (25) also taking a peek A ca door (25) A car door Plot: 15/15 AHHH. So many twists and turns S2. One second she hates him, the next she wants to be in his arms. Then she IS in his arms and she pushes him away. It's great :P I love how she denies that she loves him right until the end :) I also loved the ending, when she wouldn't let him in and how they just fooled her into thinking that he was leaving. Absolutely excellent story and plot. Creativity/Originality: 7/15 Hmph. Unfortunately, I see the love hate relationship everywhere, and one slowly falling for the obnoxious other everywhere as well. It's become a very popular theme for stories. You did add your own little twists and turns, but I think you stayed along the path that many others have done more than taking your own. Flow: 10/10 Ahhhh the story went so smoothly. I was able to tell what was going on at all times during the story. No confusion was involved Characterisation: 10/10 You were able to build on the characters so much, that I now feel like I personally know them. You made Yunho into such a romantic joker, and the girl into such an awesome person, that it was impossible to NOT feel like they were my greatest friends. Writing Style: 10/10 Wow. You had so many details in this story that it was impossible to not picture the characters and their surroundings, what they were doing, and what was happening around them. Your storyline was easy to follow, and you made it great ;D Overall Enjoyment: 5/5 AWH WHY COULDN'T REAL GUYS BE LIKE YUNHO AND JAEJOONG TT.TT Subtotal: 87/100 Bonus: 5/5 For making your story hilarious as well as adorable ;D Total: 92/105 (0 happiness)
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