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♥ The Missing Piece of My Heart [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Title: The Missing Piece Of My Heart Author: ArCoUz08 URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/ArCoUz08_6/ Reviewer: HyeJin_Rachel Title: 5/5 - The title really matches the story.. I'm really proud of you that you can still related the title with the story until the end because some people end their story without relating the title with the story.. Poster/Background: 10/10 - Your story is more to a sad story. So, sad story really matches with colours that are a little bit dark. You chose black as your background. GOOD JOB! When I was reading story, the feeling of this story really captures me and it makes me really into this story. Forewords: 8/10 - You did introduced the characters and genre. But I think that is not enough. I think you should tell more about the storyline.. I mean synopsis.. Plot: 13/15 - It's my first time reading a fanfic with this kind of genre.The plot is really good and intersting. Creativity/ Originality: 14/15 - Just like what I said before, this is my first time reading this kind of fanfic. So, I really thought that this is base on a real story. It really captures my heart. You know what, this story captures my other friends who is a fan of JaeJoong. She really likes it and she even printed it out. She keeps on reading it whenever the teacher is not in class. Now, you see how original is your fanfic, right? Flow: 9/10 - I really like how the story is going on. Everything! It is really good! But I don't know why, I feel like the ending is a little bit too fast. I was like.. Oh, this is it? Isn't it going to be a little bit longer? Hahaha.. Spelling/ Grammar : 9/10 - I noticed missing words in theis story.Luckily, I know what you are trying to say in that missing words. So, I think you should double check your story before posting it because there are someone outside that don't understand the sentences when one or two words are missing. Characterization: 10/10 -You did a good job in this. everything is being revealed really good. I mean detail. Writing Styles: 10/10 - You did an excellent job! I can imagine how the story is going on. It is really organized. I feel like you've already plot this story in a book and then you type it in the computer. GOOD JOB! Overall/Enjoyment: 5/5 - I was really into this story when I was reading it. I had it all imagined in my head. the part where Ah ra talked to the chairman... Ah.. (sighed).. It touches my heart. I even cried. I can feel how hurt it is to have someone talks bad things about us. I experienced this once before. You know what, i still can't forgive the person until now even though the person keeps on aplogizing to me Bonus: 5/5 - You make me cry and you even make me proud of you. Total: 98/100 - i hope you will keep on writing interesting stories! Go Go Tammy! Hwaiting! (0 happiness)
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