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♥ Like Butterflies [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Story: Like Butterflies Author: Keerain Story Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/keepea8ight/ Reviewer: kiyomu-chii Title: 5/5 The title suits the story very much. It’s so dramatic, just like the story. Poster/Background: 10/10 Simple but enticing… love the colors. Forewords: 9/10 Interesting… And you can already feel the mood of the story. Plot: 12/15 The plot is good but it’s kinda common. Creativity/Originality: 12/15 I love the way you make the story sound so poetic, so dramatic, but as I’ve said, the story is trite, or ordinary but the words and the way you write makes it really creative. Flow: 6/10 Actually, at first, I can keep up with the Point of Views. At first, I can identify whose POV it is but as the story progresses, it’s hard to tell if it’s Lani or HyunJoong speaking and that’s what makes it kind of confusing. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 7/10 Sometimes, you use “your” instead of “you’re” but you can fix it easily. Characterization: 9/10 It’s good but in my opinion, it doesn’t say much about what kind of person each is. But then again, it’s not a long story so, it’s understandable. Writing Style: 9/10 Really good. Overall Enjoyment: 4/5 It’s sad but perhaps you can make it more painful? Don’t get me wrong, I’m not a sadist, it’s just that I love reading angst and tragic stories so much that mild ones, for me, needs more “pain” in it as a recipe. But for those people who like sweet but sad themes, they’ll really enjoy this. *pulls out a calculator* Sub Total: 83/100 Bonus: 5/5 This is for making me feel “alive” again! ^^ I’ve been wanting to read a sad story for a while but most of the stories I see are “hyper” and “happy”. ^^ Total: 88/105 (0 happiness)
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