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♥ July 26th [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Title: July 26th Author: star-chan URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/July26/ Reviewer: HyeJin_Rachel Title: 5/5- I love the title so much.. It makes someone has interesting feeling about this fanfic. I was curious about this fanfic when I read the title... Poster/Background: 10 /10- I love the poster so much too! The quote on the poster is totally attracting. Forewords: 5/10- It was good, but you only introduce a little things... So, it was quite a mysterious thing. I think you should explain more about your story. Plot: 10/15- Great! The plot was arranged very good. But one thing, maybe this is one shot, so everything seems to happen so fast. So, I was a little bit dissapointed. I thought there was more interesting scenes to happen. Creativity/Originality: 15/15- This is real story, right? So, everything is original to me. Definitely original! Flow: 10/10- It was arranged really good. You write it out one by one. So, I was able to imagine all the scenes. I was able to feel how you feel that time. I cried too. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary:9 /10- Well, no one is perfect in this world, right? Everyone makes mistakes. There was a little bit mistakes that you made. You use the wrong past tense for the word 'lean'. Charaterisation: 8/10- I was having quite a hard time to understand the characters in this story, especially the girl that died. I think you should explain her character more. Writing Style: 10/10- It's the best!!! I love how you expressed your feelings that time by writing. Not everyone can express their feelings through writing. I'm glad that you manage to do it. Overall Enjoyment:5 /5- When I read your story, I cried. Why? Because I can feel how you felt that time. I can feel how you felt when losing a good friend. Your story makes me want to appreciate and love my friends more. One more thing, I want to answer your question.What do your friends mean to you? Answer: My friends are like part of my life. Losing them means losing part of my life. They were right there beside me when I need them. They're just like my family. A very caring and loving family. Sub-Total: 87/100 Extras: 5/5 Total:92 /105 Keep up your good work! Wish you all the best!! (0 happiness)
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