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♥ I'm My Own Heartbreaker [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Title: I'm my own heartbreaker Author: mangalover93 URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/mangalover93_3/chapter_13.shtml Reviewer: HyeJin_Rachel Title: 5/5 -Love the title so much.. It matches the story as well... Only a few people can relate the title with the story.. Even I, myself, sometimes can't relate the title and the story well. Poster/Background: 5/10 - Uhm.. Maybe because the poster that you use doesn't matches the character in this story and the background is kinda blank too. Well, i can't blame you for this since it is a collection of one-shot, right. Forewords:10/10 - You did a good job in this. Everything is being introduced so detailed which is really good. It help me to understand and feel the story more. Plot: 15/15 -Great! Interesting! Lol... The plot of the story is really great. You write the story one by one. It is easy to understand. There are no difficult scenes that are hard to understand. Creativity/ Originality: 13/15 - Well, to say the truth, I actually had already read this kind of story before. I read some story that has the same plot as yours. But, it's not that I don't feel excited when I read your story because I've read the same plot before. I still like to read it because you have your own creativity in expanding the story which makes me satisfied. Flow: 9/10 - It's good. I like it. Just like what i've said before, you expand the story so good and detail. Spelling/ Grammar : 10/10 - I don't see any wrong grammar and spelling. You also use a lot of new words that I, myself, never use. So, it's like I'm learning some new English words from you too. Thank you so much! I guess you do not have poor english at all. Characterization: 9/10 - Great job. You explained the character well but something is not enough. I think you need to explained it more. Writing Styles: 10/10 -10 point out of 10 point! Your writing are definitely the best among the fanfic that I've reviewed before. As I say, I learned a lot of new words from you. Overall/Enjoyment: 5/5 - I enjoy it so much. Maybe because you didn't do any wrong spellings and it's really easy to understand. Bonus: 5/5 - Bonus? Do you want it? Hahaha... Just kidding.. Don't be angry.. Of course I'm going to give it to you since I enjoy reading your story. Total: 96/100 -Hwaiting!!!! Love your story!!work like this. Keep it up! ;] (0 happiness)
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