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Figment [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Title: Figment Author: th1rd3ye URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/sss_tm_Figment/ Status: Completed Reviewer: ctanonymous @ Ver-Sah-Tyle {http://ver-sah-tyle.blogspot.com} Title: 5/5 Aiyou, this title makes me feel so sad... The meaning and feeling enveloped inside this one word title was very apparent, and it truly went well with your mood of your story. I had a glimpse of wh-at the main characters would be feeling when I read it. So much meaning behind this simple one word. Poster/Background: 10/10 One word: simply breathtaking. Wait, that was two words, but whatever. Let's just say it's beautiful. BoBoLi0us is one of my favorite designers. Her work is so pro and elegant. Okay, the colors were a bit bland and depressing, but they matched your genre and title beautifully. The pictures also show the characters' sadness and hurt really well. The text was quite easy to read, too. I love it! Forewords: 10/10 Good. Though it was very simple and short, I understood some of the story, but not quite a lot. That's what forewords should do - give only a little glimpse of what's going to happen, and that's exactly what you did. I really wanted to read your story after reading your forewords. Plot: 13/15 At first sight, Figment seems like a regular, typical love story with tragedy and lots of sadness. But it's really not as simple as that. The twists you add in it make it so enjoyable and different from most stories. I love it. (: But, it wasn't the most exciting story... Creativity/Originality: 9/10 There are a lot of angst stories on Winglin, but I've never seen one completely like yours. Yours is very creative, I have to say, because you added a little twist to the plot, the 'figment' part. It captivated my interest very much. Flow: 8/10 The flow mostly stayed good consistently throughout most of the story, but not all. You rushed a little with developing their relationship. You skip over how, exactly, they fall in love with each other. That is a very important part in their relationship, so you shouldn't be too brief on that part. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10 Excellent. I didn't spot any mistakes or errors at all. You must edit a lot, because your story is fantastic. Cheers! The vocabulary isn't too simple too, so good use of vocab. Characterization: 9/10 I understood quite a bit about your characters through what they felt, and what they thought, etc... However, I thought there wasn't enough... Too simple, I think I should say. Writing Style: 10/10 Simple, organized, understandable, and emotional. You write in a very simple yet organized and detailed style, and I love it. The words you chose to use also helped in letting me understand the emotions in the story. You have a great writing style. Overall Enjoyment: 5/5 It was simply very good. It was my favorite genre, and the sadness I felt from reading your story was overwhelming. It's apparent that you put a lot of effort into this story. Bonus: 5/5 For the mesmerizing and beautiful poster, and the genre. Very sad, your writing has a lot of emotion in it. Total: 94/100 (0 happiness)
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