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Dragonfly
Wednesday, April 30, 2008


Title: Dragonfly
Requested by: Amy
written by: stalecookie
completed: 100801

Characters:
Jonghyun (Shinee)
Key (Shinee)
Eeteuk (Super Junior)
Soo Yoon
Henry (Super Junior)

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-Soo Yoon -

"Thanks oppa!" My older brother dropped me off school one morning. It's actually my second week here and still, I'm not getting the hang of it. I've been studying in Europe my whole life, but when our parents divorced, we had to go back to Korea. I don't hate the place at all, it's just the people in here are too... I don't know, unfriendly maybe?

So I'm not used to this life, it's like I'm a nobody here and back home, I was the queen. Oh well, I guess you just can't have everything. Maybe this is what you call karma, and now I'm learning that I wasn't the nicest student then.

We had free period and it's for 3 hours, so I decided to hit the library to finish all the homework I have for this week, that way, I wouldn't have to worry about a single thing when I'm at home. My life has completely turned into 180 degrees--and there's no way I could act like a spoiled brat. I have to compromise.

"Kim Soo Yoon?" someone approached me. No, not someone, it was just the hottest guy in school, Jonghyun. I've heard things about him, how he's dating the school's queenka, and how he makes every girl swoon, and that he's also the captain of the soccer team. Honestly, I've been eyeing him since I got here, only then, I didn't know that he was the "it" of this school.

"Yes, that's me." I gave him my most confident smile. I suddenly thought that I looked like trash--my hair was everywhere, I haven't even had any make up on. This is really not my day. I'm usually prepared, but now? Ugh.

"Hi, I'm not sure if you're aware. But I'm your student for free period..." he quickly explained and sat on the chair beside me. Okay, I clearly have no idea what he's talking about, and I'm not sure if he got the right person.

"Uhm..." I started.

"Didn't Mr. Choi tell you?" he scratched his head, equally confused as I am.

"I'm not quite... sure..." I quickly scanned my planner for all the schedule or notes that I have inserted in there. I was talking to Mr. Choi earlier and he handed me a slip of paper that I didn't bother to read. It said that it was for extra credit or something since I transferred here in the middle of the school year... or something like that. "Oh shoot!" the piece of paper magically appeared from one of the pages of my planner.

It read: I'm assigning Mr. Kim to you, and that'll earn you the extra credit. 11am-2pm.

Great, just great.

"Well?"

"Yeah, sorry... I must've forgot." I laughed sheepishly. This is the most awkward thing ever. Believe it or not, I may be popular and all back in England, but I don't know my way around boys. I've never dated anyone, since I wasn't allowed. "So, shall we begin?"

+ + +

-Jonghyun-

When Mr. Choi mentioned the name of the tutor assigned to me, I instantly smiled to myself. I knew he was referring to the transferee, and I was right. As far as I know, she was the only Kim Soo Yoon in school, and no one else. And believe it or not, when I got to the library, I was just ecstatic, of course I didn't want to show it.

When I asked her about the tutoring thing, she looked confused first, and made me think that maybe I was thinking of the wrong person, turns out, she just didn't have any idea.

"There, I guess we're done for the day." she beamed at me. I've never enjoyed Math until now.

"Yeah, I guess we are... what's your next class?"

"Uhm, let me see..." she got her planner again and scanned it, "advanced physics. Yikes! I'm going to be late. See ya!" She rushed out of the library before I could even say another word, and before I could even ask for her number. Most girls would just push themselves to me, but not her, she seemed so distant, and so hard to reach.

"Yah! Jonghyun!" I was on my way to class when I heard that annoying voice again. Oh man, I thought that I wouldn't see her, thanks to free period. "Jonghyun! Wait!"

"Hyeoyeon..." I muttered. Yes, unfortunately, she's my so called girlfriend. It's not like I proposed to her or anything. It simply started out as a rumor, and since I wasn't dating anyone, I simply went along with it. Everyone also suspected that I'd end up with her anyway, so it wasn't a big deal... before.

But now, it was just annoying to be with her.

"I was looking for you!" she whined childishly while pouting, catching attention from everyone.

"I was studying..." I explained shortly, "look, I'll call you later. I'm going to be late for my next class."

"Since when did you care so much about class?" she raised an eyebrow and put an arm on her waist.

"Let's just go out later... I'll see you." I gave her a peck on the cheek so she'd shut up. I figured that after I graduate from this school, I'd be able to get away from her. I didn't have the heart to break up with her since she really didn't do anything... If you know what I mean.

"Mr. Kim, you're late again. What is your explanation this time?"

Great, just because our Math teacher is absent, Ms. Cruella Deville is in charge.

"I'm sorry Ms. Song, I was in the library and lost track of the time." I bowed in front of her just to show that I'm really sincere.

Bad thing was, everyone actually laughed. They thought that I was pulling some kind of a prank, now what?

"Mr. Kimf, I don't tolerate mockery in this class. Detention for 2 weeks beginning today." she said sternly and signaled me to my sit. "And I'll have someone from the honors class help you with studying so you can be productive during detention. Be thankful that the transfer student is needing extra credits for most of her subjects. And just to be sure too, I'll be giving you extra homework."

I've never been happier to be in this situation until today!

+ + +

"Aren't you going to join us later?" Minho asked before leaving the room.

"Can't man, you know I'm in detention right?"

"Oh yeah, detention with that hot new student. I wish I was in your place!" he added with envy. "Anyway, be careful, that girlfriend of yours might see you and she'd go ballistic again."

"I told you, she's not my girlfriend!"

"Yeah, and keeps telling everyone that she is. Later man!"

I made my way to the parking lot so I could put my stuff there before going to "detention", and I saw Soo Yoon... I was going to talk to her but stopped myself when I saw her talking to a familiar looking guy.

It's my sunbae, Eeteuk. Are those two related?

"Hyung!" I called him, since it has been awhile since we last saw each other.

"Yah! Jonghyun!" he called back and signalled me to come over. "How are you?" he asked as soon as I got near. "By the way, this is my sister and she goes to your school too..."

"Oppa, I already know him. We met this afternoon since I'm tutoring him..."

"That's good... and Jonghyun, since you're like my younger brother, I expect you to look out for her and she's not allowed to date yet..."

"Oppa!!!"

"What? Anyway, I'll see you later. I'll pick you up in a couple of hours."

Okay, that was odd. It's a sure thing that no guy could get close to her since she's Eeteuk's younger sister, and everyone knew what a hard case Eeteuk hyung is. Even to his close friends, he can be an ass. Another thing is, he seemed to be overprotective of Soo Yoon.

"You didn't tell me that he's your brother and Henry hyung..." I started when we were making our way to the library.

"You didn't ask. And besides, I don't want to be known as Eeteuk and Henry's little sister. I can hold my own, you know..."

"Right."

The afternoon progressed quickly, and I didn't even think that it was detention. I wanted to offer her a ride home but I remembered that hyung will pick her up, so I decided to keep her company.

Honestly speaking, she was a smart, no nonsense girl, and it was pretty interesting to talk to her. She wasn't pretentious at all, and it was easy for her to admit her mistakes. Add the fact that she's quite pretty... Soo Yoon is just... perfect.

I haven't known her a day, but I think it's safe to say that I'm starting to like her.

++ + +

-Soo Yoon-

Eeteuk oppa was making fun of me since he picked me up last night, and kept on insisting that I had a crush on Jonghyun. So what if I did? But it's not like I'm gonna go after him, duh, he's taken and he's dating one of the most popular girls in school. It's not like he's going to be interested with me. But oppa is just so weird, after he teases me with Jonghyun, he said that I shouldn't have a boyfriend, and if ever someone asked me out, I should have that guy meet oppa.

Henry oppa also told the same thing.

Bad thing about it is that, these two have the tendency to scare guys away, and that explains why I'm still single. I love them for being my older brothers, but most of the time it's just annoying.

The days went by smoothly, and I'm easily adjusting to school now, except for the dirty glances that are being thrown at me my Hyeoyeon and her clique.

I still have half an hour to kill before first period, so I dropped by my locker first to leave some of the things behind.

"Excuse me, but are you the transfer student from Europe?" someone tapped my shoulder a little hard which made me instantly turn around.

"From England actually." I stated. It was Hyoyeon, the bitch in the making. She looked at me from head to toe and gave me a piercing look.

"I don't care where you're from, just stay away from my guy..."

Her guy meaning - Jonghyun. I didn't bother saying another word, I just shrugged, shut my locker and walked away.

"Yah, don't turn your back on me. Don't you know who I am?" she yelled across the hallways which made everyone stop on their tracks and look at us. Nope, she wasn't worth my time, I waved my hand dismissively at her and continued to walk.

"That was a brave thing to do, you know?" I saw Key smirking at me during Chemistry class. He had been my lab partner here, and he's also my classmate in Advanced Physics. He's a nice guy basically, and also one of the hottest if I may add. He may easily be labelled as a nerd because of all the straight A's that he gets, but looking at him, you might wanna think twice.

"What do you mean?"

"The stunt that you pulled with Hyeoyeon. Nobody dared to walk away on her like that, she could easily kill you with her bare hands..." He leaned back on his chair and put both his arm on the back of his head.

"I didn't want to waste my time talking to her. It's not like I'm after her boyfriend or something."

That's one thing, I didn't want to admit that I was growing fond of Jonghyun, but I've been stopping myself. First he has a girlfriend, and second, I'm not allowed to date. My brothers will kill me and the guy, that's for sure. It's as if they'd let me get away that easy.

"Hey, are you going to watch the game on Saturday?" Key asked me again.

"I'm still thinking about it, not sure if Eeteuk or Henry oppa will allow me." I explained. "Why?"

"I was thinking that maybe you can watch the game with me..."

I smiled at the invitation, who am I to say no to such a hot looking guy? "Sure."

+ + +

Friday came too soon and I wasn't sure how I'm going to ask my brothers about it. It's not like it's a date... it's just one of my lab partners have asked me to go to the game... to support our school of course. No big deal.

But if they ask who I'm going to be with, for sure I'm going to be dead.

While formulating my reason, I went to the backyard to enjoy the Autumn breeze. This is what I love about the Autumn... the cool breeze against your skin, the serenity of the whole place, and how the leaves looked like gold. Everything is just so lovely. It's like it's getting ready for the Spring, like rebirth.

My mind suddenly was drawn back to Jonghyun...

He may seem arrogant and unfriendly to most people, but my first impression of him told me differently. He was a nice guy, I just don't know why he's with a bitch like his girlfriend. Of course, I didn't dare admit this to everyone, but I like him. A lot... but there's jut no way. It's Jonghyun that we're talking about here, not just someone.

I know almost all the guy would kill to be in his shoes, and most girls would grab the chance just to date him. It's as if I have a chance.

Yeah, right.

My phone suddenly rang, and I almost fell off my chair, "Yeoboseyo?"

"Hi... Uhm, it's me..."

"You?"

"Aish, sorry, I mean, Jonghyun."

"Oh, hi... you called?" I don't remember giving my number to him, I don't even remember giving my number to anyone at school. I mean, nobody really asked, how the hell did he get my number?

"Ah, yeah... Are you doing something?" He sounded nervous.

"Yeah, I mean, not really. Just waiting for my brothers to get home. What's up?" I tried to sound normal, or casual, or whatever it is called. "Did you need help in something?"

"oh no, haha, I mean, I just wanted to ask if you're going to watch the game tomorrow..."

"Yeah, I might..."

"Really?" this guy must be bipolar, he suddenly sounded ecstatic.

"I said, I might." I clarified, "you know how my brothers are. I'd probably be there with Henry oppa."

"Oh, right. But it's fine, as long as I can see you there, then it's okay..."

I'm not sure if I heard him correctly but, "what did you say?"

"Nothing... I-I have to go... see ya!" he quickly hung up before I could reply. That was odd. I'm not sure what he's up to now.

+ + +

- Jonghyun -

"Okay guys! WARM UP!" the coach yelled at us and we started moving our asses from the bench. It was pretty crowded today, not like our usual games, but it's pretty understandable since this is already in the finals. We have to win three times in order for us to get the title. I'm pretty confident with how the team's been playing so far and I guess it'll be a good thing. Plus, we also just have to work hard.

"Yah, Jonghyun! Focus!" Minho yelled at me before shoving the ball to my face.

"What gives?" I asked.

"You're not yourself again. Look, Hyeoyeon has been calling out to you since earlier and you're ignoring her. What kind of boyfriend are you?"

"Aish, stop it..."

"She's not gonna make it." he taunted.

"Wha- who?" I acted like I didn't know what he was talking about, but I still subtly scanned the bleachers for a sign of her. She told me she'd watch the game, but where is she? There's still no sign of her.

"Oh look! There's Soo Yoon!" Onew commented which made me look at where he was pointing.

"Damn it." I cussed at him knowing that the guys are making fun of me.

"He's really got it bad for her... huh?" one of the boys laughed and everyone just agreed.

The whole soccer team knew my situation with Hyeoyeon that's why they've been telling me nonstop to break up with her, especially when recently all I talk about was Soo Yoon.

Just in time that the referee signal for both captains to go in the middle of the field, I spotted her. I think she just got here, and I was half expecting that she would be with one of her brothers but actually I was wrong... she was with Key. I was waiting for her to look at me, but all her attention was with Key. What the hell was he doing with her?

"Are you okay?" Hyuk asked me as the coach signalled for the start of the game.

"Yeah." I snorted and shook my head, "I'll be okay."

+ + +

- Soo Yoon -

I'm not a big soccer fan but I'm fully aware when a player's not doing well. Obviously, this is not Jonghyun's game--in the end, the team lost.

"Do you think he's okay?" I was quick to ask Key and he simply shrugged. I can't help but feel bothered, as I even tried to approach him and just say hi. Actually, I was this close to calling his name but his girlfriend beat me to it. Oh well. So much for even saying hi.

“Let's go?” I asked Key.

“All right. Will your brother pick you up, or would you want me to drive you home?” he asked.

It was a bit of a relief when Henry oppa agreed that I go with Key, turns our, they were close friends so without thinking twice, he entrusted me to him.

“I think he said that he was going to pick me up...” I informed him, still quite unsure.
“Want me to call him?” he offered.

“I guess...”

While Key made a quick phone call to oppa, I felt that someone was watching me. I scanned the now thinning crowd, when I noticed that Jonghyun was standing a couple of feet away from the bleachers. He was with the other guys from the soccer team—i didn't have the heart to approach him because I was pretty much intimidated so I just gave him a sly smile and waved, but he completely ignored me.

What the hell was his problem? I'm pretty sure that he saw me and that he was looking right at me.

“He said that he's going to pick you up, so I'll keep you company while we wait for him.”

“No, it's fine. You might need to go now, it's kind of late.”

“Nah, don't worry about it...”

+ + +


- Jonghyun -

“Come on, you're such a coward!” Hyuk was pushing me to go to where she was standing. She gave me a little wave but I was too frustrated to even nod at her. I don't get it, why did she have to go to with this guy? She barely knew him.

And when I was finally ready to approach her, that's when her brother showed up. She was obviously looking bored as Henry hyung was busy chatting with the other kids from school.

“Yah, Minho! Jonghyun!” Henry hyung called us, great! Key was no longer there with them.

“Hyung, how are you?”

“I kind of missed playing the game, but I heard from my little sis that you lost...” Henry hyung commented while shaking his head. “Good thing that this is just the first round, if not, you'd be eliminated.”

“Yeah, good thing.” Hyuk mocked as if teasing me. After the game, I decided to tell him that I got distracted because of Soo Yoon's date. “By the way, Soo Yoon-ssi, where's your date?”

“What date?” Henry hyung glared.

“Oppa, it was Key, and no, it wasn't a date.” Soo Yoon was quick to reason.

“Is that guy making a move on my sister?” Henry hyung ignored Soo Yoon and asked us.

“Oppa!” she just whined.

“No, I don't think he is. But I know someone who's planning to.” Hyuk started laughing at his own joke, apparently Henry didn't like it.

“My sister's not allowed to date yet. And if someone wants to go out with her they would have to get past us...” he firmly stated. “Anyway, we should go.”

Soo Yoon was still frowning as she followed his brother to the car. Damn, I never even had the chance to talk to her.

“Did you hear what hyung just said?” Hyuk grinned, “I pity you Jonghyun, that's Eeteuk and Henry we're talking about. Hahaha!”

Wow, thanks a lot man. You're really a good friend.

Come Monday, I was determined to not talk to her at all. The only problem was with detention.

The previous days have been fun for us, although it was just a short span that I've known her, I already feeling something strong towards her... and I've wanted to tell her a lot of times but it wasn't that easy. Man, I've been chickening out even to just ask her to have a cup of coffee.

“Hey, you're late.” she kidded as soon as I sat down on the table, across her.

“Yeah.”

“Are you okay?”

“Yeah.”

“Are you sure?” she prompted again.

“Look, how many times I would have to tell you that I'm fine.” I yelled, but not really wanting to. I saw in her eyes that she looked hurt. My hand reached out for hers but she pulled it back.

“Fine, lets start then. Chapter 6 right?” Soo Yoon tried to act nonchalant as she scanned the textbook in front of her.

“I'm sorry...” I started.

“Oh good, I've already discussed a few things about this last week, right?” she forced a smile. “Lets start so we can finish quickly.”

+ + +

Soo Yoon

The day was actually fine and I was looking forward to the tutoring session with Jonghyun, but I have no idea why he had to act like a jerk. If I did something wrong that in any way offended him, he could've just told me and that would've been fine, right? I mean, it's not like I'd hate him if he did that.

“Looks like we're all done. Anyway, see you tomorrow.” I faked a smile and quickly fixed my stuff so I could leave. The past couple of hours had been a burden and I really didn't like to spend another minute with him.

“Soo Yoon!” he ran after me, but I chose to ignore him.

“Soo Yoon, wait!” he grabbed me by my elbow which made me stop.

“What? Did you forget something?” I tried to sound as calm as possible even if I was so tempted to yell at him.

“I'll take you home.”

“It's fine. Eeteuk oppa will pick me up.”

“Then I'll keep you company until he arrives. It's getting dark and it's not safe.” he insisted.

“I'm fine. I can handle myself.”

“Please, and I just wanted to say I'm sorry.” he looked down on the ground.

“For? You didn't do anything. It was my fault that I was so pushy...” I replied with a hint of sarcasm in my voice.

“No, I'm sorry. I got confused.” he sighed heavily, “Soo Yoon, I want to explain why I'm acting this way... but it's not that easy...”

“Well, I'm waiting...”

“I... about the other night... I mean... I just want to say...”

This is taking forever, and I'm not sure what he wanted to say. But before he could even speak, oppa arrived.

“Hey Jonghyun, thanks for looking out for my sister.” Eeteuk oppa acknowledged.

“Bye...” I said and made my way to the car, along with oppa.

“Hyung, wait!”

This made me and oppa stop on our tracks.

“Yes?”

“Hyung...” Jonghyun started and I was eagerly listening. “Tomorrow evening, after the sessions, is it okay if I drive Soo Yoon home? But I'll also take her out to dinner.”

“What for?” Eeteuk oppa raised an eyebrow, his glance switching from me to Jonghyun. Oh now, oppa might think that we're dating.

“Oppa, it's not what you think, I'm not dating him.”

“Hyung, please. You said before that if Soo Yoon dates someone, it should be through you first, right?”

“So technically you're asking my sister out for a date.” It was more like a statement rather than a question. “But have you asked her?”

“Uh... no....”

I was lost, I think they are the only ones who understand the flow of the conversation...

“If she agreees, then it's fine with me.” Oppa told him and signalled me to go in the car.

“What was that about?” I asked him.

“That guy is seriously inlove with you!” he laughed.

“Oppa!”

“Henry should know about this, didn't you know that he liked that guy for you for the longest time?”

“Aish, you two are confusing me.”

+ + +
Same time the following day, he was actually there early. And it seemed like he was nervous.

Well, here goes another two hours with him.

“You got any homework for tomorrow?” I asked him.

“They're all done...”

“What? So what are we doing now?”

“I don't know...” he smiled at me, that irresistable smile of his, it makes me want to melt on the spot.

“Yah, don't smile like that.”

“Why?”

“Nothing.” To divert my attention, I opened one of my textbooks in Physics and made an excuse that I had a big exam coming up the following day, but it isn't true. I just didn't want to be distracted. I promised myself that I'm keeping my distance.

“Soo Yoon... uhm, I assume that you would be busy tonight right?” and now he sounded disappointed. What the hell, he is really bipolar!

“What is wrong with you? Just a few minutes ago you were pretty ecstatic, and now you're looking all depressed...”

“No-nothing... I was just wondering...”

“What?”

“Well, yesterday... I mean, can I drive you home today? I mean, after this?”

“Oppa will be picking me up...” My eyes were still on the book, not really understanding a single word I've been reading.

“He said okay yesterday, and he just told me to ask you...”

So that's what they were talking about...

“Fine.”

The funny thing about this day was, it wasn't just a drive home. Turns our, he talked to oppa about asking me out, so before heading home, we first had dinner, then some desert. It was late and the odd thing was, none of my brothers were looking for me.

“Are you sure that oppa knew about this?” I questioned while we were on our way back to my home.

“Yes. I was even talking to him earlier about it. He said that he already agreed and that it was my problem to ask you out for this date.” I noticed him scratch his head, and he tends to do that when he's nervous. And hell, I didn't even think of this as a date.

“We're here...” he even walked me to the doorstep. I think this guy has a deathwish.

Honestly speaking, I had no idea what he did for oppa to agree to this, and he also mentioned earlier that he already made things clear with Hyeoyeon. He confessed that she was not even his girlfriend, just a some girl who happens to be clingy. Like I needed that information.

“I'm good here... thanks.” I was about to open the door when he just pulled me to him and planted a kiss on my lips. Technically I was stunned and I wanted to push him away but I slowly gave in.

But then we stopped when someone spoke.

“Excuse me...” It was Eeteuk oppa, standing beside Henry oppa giving a threatening look at Jonghyun. It literally made him shrink and I wanted to laugh at how cute he looked.

“I just said that you can take my sister out, I didn't say that you can kiss her.” Eeteuk commented.

“If you make her cry, you know what would happen to you...” Henry oppa butted in.

“Of course, I won't make her cry...” Jonghyun almost whispered.

“Be here first thing tomorrow morning. We'll wait for you...”

“Yes. I will.” he quickly bowed and rushed back to his car.

“What was that about?” I asked the two.

“We need someone to do the dishes, now go in. It's late!”

Good Lord, I hope Jonghyun could endure this. I really hope that they won't make his life a living hell.


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