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♥ A Cup Of Love [Review]
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Title: A cup of Love Author: ehye_H@ekey URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/acup_love/ Reviewer: HyeJin_Rachel Title: 3/5 - A Cup Of Love... Hmm... Well, I can't really see how the title matches the story. Maybe because the chapter is not many to read yet, so that's why I have this feeling. Maybe I can see how the title relates to the story when the story reaches it's climax. Poster/Background: 6/10 - The poster and background are okay. But I find the poster doesn't really attracts people. I mean.. To attract others to read your story, not only the plot must be good, but the poster and background must be attractive as well too. How about you make a poster that reveals the main character of the story. Both female and male. Forewords:5/10 - Okay.. You did tell us who are the character of the story. But you didn't introduce the characters What I mean here is, you should tell the characteristic of the character. In that way, it can help readers to understand the character and the plot of the story. Plot: 9/15 - I can see the beginning of the story. But I can't really understand what is going on. Maybe because this story is still new hasn't come to it's climax yet. Creativity/ Originality: 9/15 - Everyone has their own opinion on making a story. So do you. But I still can't get the originality that you want to show. i think it's because the story hasn't come to it's climax. Flow: 5/10 - The flow? Hmm.. i think it's good. Many funny things are coming on. Spelling/ Grammar : 5/10 - I can see that you have a bit wrong on your grammar, as well as your spelling. You should check your spelling before posting. About your grammar, there are some parts that I misunderstood what you was going to say. Luckily, I manage to understand it later. So, I think you should read again once before posting. Sometimes, missing one or two words can actually change the original meaning that you want to say. Characterization: 3/10 - You did tell the characters. But you didn't tell the characteristic of the characters. Characteristic of characters is actually really important for readers to understand the plot. Writing Styles: 9/10 - Great! It was quite easy to understand. But not all parts are easy to understand. Overall/Enjoyment: 3/5 - I think the story is great. I'm expecting a huge climax story ( DAEBAK ) from you. Bonus: 3/5 - I keep on laughing when I read this. because it is really interesting and funny. Total: 60/100 - Hwaiting!!! Go on with your story!! I believe you can go far and do better in future. Soory for the lateness in reviewing your story. (0 happiness)
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