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♥ Because I Know
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Author: 'Niii Title: Because I know {One-Shot} Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/_know Reviewer: Jaelliex3 @ VST {http://ver-sah-tyle.blogspot.com} Note: The author and I have no relations or whatsoever. The outcome of this review is based on my opinion only, so don't hate me for whatever mark the author gets. Title: 3/5 The title didn't really stand out for me, although it related your story just like any titles out there, it wasn't something that I would click on if I was browsing through winglin. Poster/Background: 10/10 I loved it. The mood of your poster and the theme of your story were well linked, it was nice that it related to the story. Some posters are just there for show but yours connected with your story. Forewords: 10/10 It kept me wondering about what was happening. It made me want to read more; it was simple and a great way to start a story. Plot: 15/15 Beautiful, I'm speechless right now like seriously, it was beautiful. Creativity/Originality: 15/15 You were creative from the beginning to the end. I didn't expect her to be actually dead, I thought somewhere along the middle part of your story that she had given her heart to him since she was strong and he wasn't but as I kept reading... WOW that's all I can say. Flow: 6/10 Although your creativity was really good at some point of the story I think everything happened so quickly. I wanted you to extend the love between Jaemin and Taemin but it ended so quickly for me. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/10 I had no problems with this section, I mean everything was great. Characterisation: 10/10 Every one played their parts very well. It was all spread out amongst each member of Shinee and Jaemin was described well. Who and what she was to Taemin. Writing Style: 8/10 Writing style is very common. I've seen this around a lot in winglin and because I read one-shots so much I get to see all the different types of writing out there. But yours is fairly good as well. Overall Enjoyment: 5 /5 This was a beautiful story that I would read over and over again if I want something to read. This is one of those stories that I will never get sick of. Sub-Total: 84/100 Extras: 5/5 Extra goes to Jaemin and Key. If I'm not mistaken I know someone with the same exact name Hwang Jaemin and she's a Taemin lover. So I don't know if it’s the same girl.... Hehe and my KEY, Oh boy this guy is just sexy. KEY BIASED! Also, when Taemin couldn't finish calling Jaemin, he was only saying Jae... I was like “MEE!” LOL. Total: 89/105 Message: Thanks for requesting at VST and thank you for reviewing one of my story “The First and Last One” Hehe I was the author of that story. Hope to see more requests from you. <3 Jaelliex3 (0 happiness)
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