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Love Hurts [Review]
Monday, January 7, 2008
Author:a y i n g` Title: Love Hurts Link:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/aying_2/ Reviewer:BangBangVIP Site: VST http://ver-sah-tyle.blogspot.com Title: 4/5 - I suppose it does fit the story. It doesn't seem very original though. Poster/Background: 8/10 -Even though the background is plain, I still think it looks good with the poster. As for the poster, I think the picture of Yoochun is the only one that seems fitting for the story. I still love the poster though. Forewords: 10 /10 -The forewords was great. It got me interested. Plot: 13/15 -The plot in general is a good one, that happens to be used a lot, and can be twisted in quite a few ways to make it better, which is what you did. Creativity/Originality: 13/15 -Your take on the unoriginal plot line, made it original, if that made sense. As for creativity, a little more into why Yoochun had to marry Jessica would have been nice. Flow: 10/10 -It flowed nicely for a one shot. Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10 - A few missed commas, and you put 'descent' instead of 'decent'. I won't tell you what the definition is though, cuz I know you know. It was just a small error. Overall, you did good here. Your vocabulary makes the story more interesting. Characterization: 8/10 - You did good here too. Personally, I would have liked a little more details as to what the characters looked like with facial expressions and all, but it was still great. Writing Style:10 /10 -Easy to read and tell who is saying what, so I liked it. Overall Enjoyment: 4/5 -Not a fan of DBSK, but it was written exceptionally well, so I enjoyed it. Sub-Total: 89/100 Extras:5 /5 -You got a high score, not because you are my dongsaeng, but because your story was well done like a fine piece of steak. haha. Bad joke sorry. I love how well you write your stories. Total: 94/105 (0 happiness)
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